Just Sayin’!
Sittin’ here dreamin’
thinkin’ only of you!
Lovin’ you thoughts,
beggin’ me to make do.
Singin’ our love songs,
dancin’ sadly alone.
Playin’ with words,
hopin’ feelings are shown.
Promisin’ I’m close,
breathin’ you in.
Just sayin’!
I’m wishin’ I was
kissin’ you again.
A note from Chris
This poem is all about verbs (and gerunds perhaps too!) This week at d’Verse Poets Pub the prompt is to submit a work that “incorporates a rich use of verbs”. Please visit us and enjoy the work of so many talented folks from all around the globe. The title of the prompt this week is “Banish Boredom ~ Rx: Verbs!
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I love this! Precious and sweet thoughts we all can relate to when we’re in love. Just sayin’.
Thanks for sharing your precious and sweet thoughts about my precious and sweet thoughts today Millie! I appreciate your long time support and comments as always. 😉 Chris
Enjoyed the voice you created in this, mostly related to verb choice, using the ‘ to bring it home. Just sayin’
It was fun Victoria! I wrote it without the apostrophes first…just made it more personal and demonstrated so much more of a closeness with the ‘s…..sssssss.
What a sense of longing … that kiss .. hope it comes to you…
Bjorn, ~ I live for my muse’s kisses of course! Thanks for visiting and sharing with us again.