Under Our Starlight Canopy
Stargaze moments
cosmic wonders
one heavenly night.
Let us marvel
launch lunar flights
Gemini’s in sight.
Creek frogs croaking
green with envy
as we trek our way.
Cozy blanket
kick off our shoes
galactic survey.
Planets align
meteors streak
bodies in motion.
Safe in my arms
soon to be one
utmost devotion.
Celestial orbs
float in deep space
no mission control.
Flashlight in face
“greetings earthlings!”
spoke the park patrol.
A note from Chris
This poem actually started out to be completely serious as I outlined my vision and experimented with the storyboard. At some point it took a more humorous path and I just went with it! This poem is a form of a “rhymed couplet” and consists of thirteen syllables per line. Each line consists of a 4-4-5 pattern (total of 13 syllables) to the form. Don’t be surprised if I release another version of this poem with a different conclusion soon!
© Chris Wood 2012 All Rights Reserved
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I love this, short, sweet and how dare that park ranger, LOL
makes me think of blankets and starry nights ….smiles…
haha…darn park rangers showing up at just the wrong time….my satelite shrinking now in their lights…lol….
Sweet and lovely. 🙂
Fun, sweet, sexy, and full of play. Really enjoyed.
nice…i like the humor…and the romance…thanks for the smile…
OMGoodness! That is the funniest poem! I love the romantic humor! Thanks for putting a smile on my face.
Millie, Thanks so much for your approval! I, (of course!) can only imagine this happening to someone else! I am glad it tickled your funny bone and warmed your heart! That puts a smile on my face too!